The Power ofFeedback
How Quill.org Transforms Student Writing
Every student can become a stronger writer. Through intelligent, iterative feedback, Quill guides students from vague responses to specific, evidence-based writing, one revision at a time.
Writing is thinking made visible
When students struggle to express ideas clearly, they're often struggling to think clearly. Quill's AI-powered feedback doesn't just correct errors. Itteaches students to think more precisely.
The examples you're about to see come from a reading comprehension activity about Raoul Wallenberg, a Swedish diplomat who saved thousands of Jewish lives during World War II.
Students read a passage and then complete three sentence stems using evidence from the text. What makes these examples illuminating is not just the final answers, but the journey. Watch how students transform vague generalizations into specific, evidence-rich sentences through targeted feedback.
Specific & Actionable
Never just "wrong." Always pointing to exactly what needs improvement and how to fix it.
Scaffolded Learning
Each prompt builds on the previous, guiding students step by step toward mastery.
Evidence-Based
Pushes students to support claims with concrete textual evidence from the reading.
One Question Changes Everything
A single targeted question transforms a vague answer into a concrete, evidence-based response.
Complete the sentence
Wallenberg decided to help Jewish people in Budapest during WWII because...
Watch the student's writing journey unfold
Layered Coaching
Quill addresses one issue at a time — first sentence structure, then content specificity — guiding the student through three revisions.
Complete the sentence
Wallenberg decided to help Jewish people in Budapest during WWII because...
Watch the student's writing journey unfold
From Vague to Vivid
The student knows Wallenberg faced danger, but Quill pushes them to name a specific example — transforming a general claim into concrete evidence.
Complete the sentence
Wallenberg decided to help Jewish people in Budapest during WWII, but...
Watch the student's writing journey unfold
Narrowing the Focus
The student starts too general, adds vague words, then a full new sentence. Quill redirects them to combine sentences and reach a specific, single-sentence answer.
Complete the sentence
Wallenberg decided to help Jewish people in Budapest during WWII, but...
Watch the student's writing journey unfold
Building Layer by Layer
The student gradually adds detail across four attempts — from vague danger to guns to motive to the specific action that triggered the threat.
Complete the sentence
Wallenberg decided to help Jewish people in Budapest during WWII, but...
Watch the student's writing journey unfold
From Outcome to Evidence
The student knows Wallenberg saved lives, but Quill pushes them to explain how — from vague 'freeing them' to specific actions like safe houses and protective passports.
Complete the sentence
Wallenberg decided to help Jewish people in Budapest during WWII, so...
Watch the student's writing journey unfold
Evidence and Precision
The student builds toward a detailed answer about Wallenberg's actions, and Quill catches a grammar issue along the way — showing how content and mechanics work together.
Complete the sentence
Wallenberg decided to help Jewish people in Budapest during WWII, so...
Watch the student's writing journey unfold